Lights

Really creative idea with the format. It took me a while to get use to the line set-up, and having a few less syllables in the third line of every stanza. The only thing that threw me off was the first line of the second stanza. Only because it seems more like a concluding sentence for a last stanza. The rest of the poem was good, a joy to read.

This was good aswell. It has a somewhat peacefull image. And I noticed the rhyme scheme you used. Very clever! 5/5

`Taleee

I think this is the best poem you've written, out of the one's I've read anyway. It shows your pure talent for writing. Few writers on this site can carry of a poem using enjambment so perfectly. The rhymes seem effortless and the structure is flawless. Not worth anything below a 5. Amazing poem

I liked the rythym alot from this poem. I found it very well written, and I actually think so far this is my favorite one of your's I have read.

This is an excellent poem. I love the descriptive words and how you put it all together. Incredible! =)