If one day...

by Paige   Dec 16, 2004


If 1 day u feel like crying, call me,
i don't promise u DAT i will make u laugh but i can cry wit u .

If 1 day u want 2 run away, don't b afraid 2 call me, i don't promise 2 ask u 2 stop, but i can run wit u.

If 1 day u don't want 2 listen 2 anybody, call me and i promise 2 b very quiet.

But if 1 day u call me and there is no answer... cum fast 2 c me... perhaps i need u
:)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweetist sin

    Awwwwww so cute love it !~~~~~~~

    hey could u check out my poems it will menat alot!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    This is cute. Ireally like it. This is how i feel about my boo. lol I like your love poems. Maybe you should think about writeing more.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashes

    The poem was pretty good, but it drives me CRAZY when people use '1' instead of 'one' or 'wit' instead of 'with'. I despise internet slang, and if the poem had been any longer, i probably would have given up on it. So my advice: type with correct spelling and punctuation, you'll get more readers that way, and it makes you look more sophisticated, even at the age of 12, like you.

    My two cents. Good poem though.
    ,,Ashes..

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