is this true? gosh u r such a horny girl...but these r some great poems, very hot...great job.loves.

bloody hell girl. this poem is good, luvin it! lol xx

Woo.. girl were you horny or what... I thought the poem was "Steaming Hott" and Very Great on the details! I think from your 2 poems that people probably got really horny!!...lol... *5/5*

they were awesome!! absolutely unreal. the detail was increadibe and so precise! well done girl, you cease to amaze me! i'm gonna have to try that ice thing with my boyf. LOL!! take care sweety xxx

AMAZING! loved it!, Keep it up!

that was some crazy stuff. good job. i cant believe you still got it to rhyme haha

omg your poem was awesome! the whole ice thing kinky never tried that before im loving it! x3amy

very sexy!! i really liked it.

I laughing at the thought of how many GUYS had boners reading this! HAH!!!!

Great poem, 5/5

wow, thats all i have to say
~selina~

WOW....I am speechless....Awesome poem!!! I think guys reading this will need a cold shower when they're done, what am I talking about everyone will. Lol Anyway great job, keep it up and take care.....HAPPY HOLIDAYS

that poem is hot lol. god i wish i did sht like dat with ma bf. i cant believe u made it all rhyme so well. amazing.

amazing, is this true? leave me a message if it is and i felt the feeling

that was great, i loved it...5/5

That poem was incredible and reminded me of great times.
ICE IS FUN!!!!

Very nicely done!!!

"I begin to shake,
The tension mounts,
How we finish, that’s what counts,
I feel the friction against my clit,
You grind on me; I’m loving it,
“You love me?” you feel my hot breath in your ear,
“I love you so much,” I hear you say clear,"

^ That's my favorite stanza.

This was a pretty good poem. The flow was good and the rhymes were original. The rhyming scheme changed a lot, but it was still good. Keep up the work :)

~BJ~

Theyre both REALLY good.

That Was Hot! =]