I...don't

by In_Your_Eyes   Dec 18, 2004


You asked me tonight to tell you true
To tell you if I really loved you
I knew if I told you how I feel
You’d have to pay, so the truth I had to conceal

I’ve loved you since childhood
I would tell you that if I could
My true feelings I have to hide everyday
For it will always be my loved ones that pay

Sometimes you have to give up your own foolish pride
To be a hero inside
You may have to give up your dreams and your life
To save the world from all the strife

So as I hide my true identity
Being two people and trying to keep my serenity
I watch you make a new life
Now I have a new fight to fight

This is my last chance to tell you how I feel
But it’s too dangerous for my feelings to reveal
So for your safety I won’t
All I can say is I…don’t

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    sounds like something Peter Parker would say to M.J. in the next spiderman film. Intresting that was a good read keep up the work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    I like the idea of using the title in the end, makes it powerful and emotional.Ireally liked your poem,it confused me a bit, but it was nice!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    that was really good. i liked the rhyming and the use of odd words. it was a little confusing...is it true? why can you reveal how you feel? well the poem rocks and please keep writing

    dawn

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    this was a good poem the lines like others said need to be leghtened....but all in all it was a good poem and emotional....x)

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Beautiful poem. I love it. I gave it a five. Keep it up.

    Love much,
    Tiff