Shall I End My Life?

by ChildofGod87   Dec 23, 2004


I have been thinking...
that maybe people can
live without me!

I seen that I'm in the way...
I see that I'm not wanted...
Especially, to give out help
to the people that could
careless of me...
(But then it's some of the
people that are my friends)

I have felt that life takes
it's own courses...

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Am I seriously not wanted?
Can anyone just look and see what everyones doing?

Pushing people away from you!
Pushing them so far that they
might think of doing something
horrible to themselves!!!

So much drama...
So much pain...

That you shall think to yourself:
"Did I do something or say something
to make them think this way?"
(Or for that matter feel!)

Everyone could hurt themselves
Very badly as well...
Our minds can take over almost
everything that we have and own

That's where death comes in...

Copyright by Sedusha

*By what I wrote doesn't mean I'm going to die!!! I just wrote this from my point of view! Don't take it the wrong way everyone!*

*Plz comment & rate.. thanks for reading*

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  • awww i love it! its so awesome. keep on writing! ::adds to favorites:: take care and keep up the good work! Merry Christmas!
    Your Armenian Friend,
    -Michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Girl, it's not only about you say or wanting that! But the fact that some people or teens go through some depression or something... and threaten they're life with death or miserble feels that could cause alot of things!!!...

    Thank you for the comments... God Bless Everyone and Merry X-mas!!!

    *Lots of Love Sedusha*

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    heart touching poem...take care and Merry Christmas...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Aishite Imasu

    This is a wonderful expression of ur feelins. I remember this exact feeling. Its not the funnest keep ur chin up and you'll find you are wanted/needed in the most of unlikely places.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    hey girl...did amanda and rohit not read what u wrote at the bottom...lol...gosh...they my friends but nah...they overlooked it. lol.
    great poem...u r wanted.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    anyways...u asked me what i thought on karltons poem...about him and amanda...i think this is oh so stupid...pssh...i think he has moved on and she could do better...i am amandas best friend...and she is so hurt by this yes but so is he...he just is so confused on some things....and i dont think they r meant for each other but i do think they should be friends...or at least try...in case u didnt know karlton tryed to get w/ sheyla...amandas friend also on this site i know u know her b/c u got her in ur profile...lol...dang its like all kinds of drama goin on...all i know is i am gonna b there for em both and everything lol...what do u think girl? well God bless...loves.