He who once stood among us

by David   Dec 23, 2004


You left us with such a pain,
but a pain i can understand
something you had to do,
for you yourself alone

i wish I'd been there,
even just to say goodbye
for you this was the only way
for that demonic pain to die

now as the hearse rolls away
i just stop stand and weep
for i never thought I'd see the day
that this pain would seep so deep

i lie here on my bed
eye's filled with tears for you
thinking how u lost the will
the mighty will to live

so now i hope you're somewhere else
with no pain left in you
i hope you feel so peaceful
as if you're floating on a cloud

so you, who once stood among us
and dreadfully, no longer do
i just hope you know this
we all still love you

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  • 14 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    Thats really good. im sorry you lost someone.

  • 15 years ago

    by J u l e s

    This poem is touching. i have lost a friend too and its not a great feeling .. i am so sorry you have to go through this though loves. may your friend rest in peace

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Well written & beautifully penned 5/5 ... amazing !

  • 16 years ago

    by David Ensor

    Wow man, that was really nice. you showed the pain very well, but in a sort of optimistic way, very cool.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love it! great job on this one =]