Finally

by ♥kHarIsMa♥   Dec 29, 2004


It happened so suddenly i didn't even know
that finally he was gonna let his true emotions show.

he told me he loved me without a dout'
and that my love he can never go without.

he told me of his heart and the way it must be
he told me the one person he loved more that anything
was me.

he told me I'd be in his heart forever,
and that one day we'd be back together.

but theres one thing standing in our way
that will forever be here...that will forever stay.

the girl that has his son..his life
the girl that one day might make his wife.

maybe one day ill be that special one
that will love, hold and cherish his son..

please rate and comment..it would really mean a lot to me...ill greatly return the favor...thank you..

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mimi112

    Awesome poem, very deep and nicely written !

  • 19 years ago

    by Shelbie

    Great poem...you truely have talent
    Shelb

  • 19 years ago

    by Shelbie

    Wow...that poem was awesome!!!
    Shelb

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    This is another beautiful poem, Karisma (by the way, I love your name)

    There are just a couple changes I'd think about...just to mkae it flow better. I will send them to you via private message.

    Great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shelbie

    nice poem keep writing i really liked it alot