Forgive

by mckayla   Dec 30, 2004


Forgive the sun who didn't shine
the sky had asked her into dine

forgive the stars that heard your wish
the moon prepared their favorite dish

Don't hate the birds cause they are free
don't envy all the things they see

don't block the wind, but here its cry
or else life may pass you by

forgive the storm it means no harm
couldn\'t resist to show its charm

forgive the earth that never turns
don\'t hate the sun cause to much burns.

life intends to not cause pain
the flowers bloom from all the rain

the storm will come and it will pass
the sun that shines grows the grass

the wind it cannot help but cry
the stars at night will light up the sky

forgive the world in which we live
we all find peace if we forgive

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nito Vazquez

    This is nito and this is very good. :-)!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*! call me when u see this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    I really liked this poem. But I think that it would have fit even better in the nature poems. :-) Good job! *Jordan-Paige

  • 19 years ago

    by mckayla

    awwww. thanks ever one for commenting my poem. well thanx to all except lazelle, oh well if yall liked then then im happy im writing a new poem for yall to read it will be on here in a week or so.
    love yall, mckayla
    p.s. you are welcome, bella latina

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    awesome work .. ! ! lol .. !
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    that was good.. i liked it!!!
    -K