Sweet Release

by angelposer   Dec 31, 2004


In the beginning
It was just like a hobby
I started wondering
What other people saw in it

Then I tried it
And I loved it
Just like beer or drugs
It got me on a "high"
Happy...
For a few moments at least

Too fast
I became a great fan
I became a slave to it

When I feel I have lost control
Desperate
I go to the only comfort I have found

It makes me forget
Forget everything
My life
My problems...

I unplugs the cord
Steals me into another world
Where you stop feeling
Stop hurting

They tears are dried
The pain goes away
Momentarily
The heart stops bursting
When I bring the razor to my skin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Hey, I love this poem its so awesome <3333

  • 19 years ago

    by Someone

    (woot) great poem! :-) Keep it up! :-D

    ** 5 **

  • 19 years ago

    by Clown

    Calling it a drug, it was pretty good, Im sorry for you if its true, you need someone o talk to, someone who can help you. i pitty you, the razor did to much damage to my family i dont want anyone else to suffer it.,

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Very descriptive about the motives behind cutting. Thank you for sharing.

  • 19 years ago

    by !*!Zoe!*!

    I love this poem. This is exactly what happened to me. Fortuantely, I have been able to stop. I want to thank you for the comment you left on my poem "Personal". It really means a lot to me and I truly appreciate it. Back to this poem. I don't know how to describe how well this poem is written. You capture the images so vividly and I was completely engorssed in the poem.
    Again,
    Thanks,
    xoxZoexox