In search daily..*

by Mustardhart   Jan 4, 2005


This is a probe into life, more or less. Was just thinking why we fret, pout when we dont get what we want? And of course why must we loose what is dear to us? Well, tell me what you think!!!
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When we
Just can’t stay
Not because
We don’t fit
But, because
We choose not.

The miserly
Attitude borne
Are a
Passage refused
For the
Down trodden heart

We cry within,
Groan without
For what is
Denied and refused
By pride
And deceptive stance

When will
The rains come
When will
The cool breezes blow
This soon,
Who knows?

© Gagman Cleopas

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  • 19 years ago

    by Scaleeski

    Great one man..Seriously...Loved it!

    Chris

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome poem, the third and fourth stanzas especially, its a little confusing, but that makes the poem better... nice work!

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    awesome work wit this one hun .. i loved it and very much enjoyed every bit ... ! THANKS FOR UR LATEST COMMENT but id love for u to check out my latest poem I added yesterday it would mean alot .. THANKS HUN and take care and cant wait to read mroe from u

  • Omg, what an amazing poem, you really are so talented! I really liked it and thanks for sharing! Excellent writting and two thumbs up!
    Continue to write:o)
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a very profound poem excellent