Noticeing Nothing

by Rachelle   Jan 6, 2005


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After all shes done
After all the hurt shes caused
After being replaced
She finally notices
After 5 months
All I can do
All I can say
Is nothing...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Heartfelt. And that's why it deserves a 5.

  • 20 years ago

    by Knoxy

    hey, this is perty good, and i can tell it came frum the heart, keep it up, and take care!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 20 years ago

    by sarah jenkins

    I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

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