awww this is a good poem xxxxxxxx

Great poem! Keep up the good work!

aw, that was a good poem, written really well and flowed very nicely, good job and keep it up :) *hugs* thanks for the comment! x x x x

An unusual style of writing, but still good though.

Keep Writing.

Nici.

its kind of sad, ive been there before.. but as a guy with the girl appologising

I enjoyed this poem...cute way to format it..if I have one critique(and it's something I have to be concious of all the time cause I do it alot as well!!!) is to try to stay away from the common..true, blue,etc rhymes just for the sake of ryhming..try to think of something a bit more unique..(as I said..one of MYbiggest problems too!!)..for example use embue, or something like that..good job, take care, Michelle :)

That was quite pretty.

excellent poem, i liked the way you wrote it from both perspectives, take care, and thanks for the comments

um this is different.... so did u write it? um anyways loved it it sorta reminded me of a time last year i loved the first part
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bec xXx

great poem.. nicely done..:)

sad but i guess he deserved it well like ur poems alot!

Hey I liked that~great job, as always, don't really know what to say:/ cept good job!

very nice poem..i likew you u described what happened from 2 points of view

wow...piecy, but effective. at first, i didn't understand the spread out structure, but at the end, i didn't care. Job well done. 4/5.

christa//no motiv?

I like the first part better...good job with the rhyming. Very nice.

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