Dying

by rachel   Jan 6, 2005


Spinning always faster
Continuing never stopping
Not my own life’s master
My soul is forever dropping

Falling even deeper
This hole is eternally black
Salvation becomes steeper
The evils do attack

Spiraling forever underneath
Dizzying is my fall
Crying through my clenching teeth
There’s no one left to call

Slipping into the everlasting gloom
Running from my pain
Hiding from fate’s eternal doom
Adding one more stain

Scared to feel reality
Unaware of what is true
Hoping there’s some technicality
I don’t know what to do

Someone take care of me
I can’t handle what I feel
knowing no one can see
I want for this to not be real

Longing for it all to end
Afraid to keep on trying
until the helping hand that's lend
Inside I know I'll be dying

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    really great poem,the words flowed fantastically.

    keep it up and stay strong, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is good hun!! keep on writing, and take care..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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