by FireCracker Jan 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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A poor young boy |
by Chelsi
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I am so sorry for what happened!! I know you probably get that a lot, but I am truly sorry. I hope you are doing better!! Great job!! 5/5 Keep writin!! |
by Elyssa
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AWSOME!!!! I loved it.... very very touching!!!!!! It made me tearie eyes! keep it up! |
by Robyn Park
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A very sweet and sad poem with a good message. You expressed yourself very well in it. A good lesson to be learned, just sad some people have to learn it that way. Anyway, well written and a nice read. Keep it up. |
by Minkus
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My heart broke |
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wow, that was very powerful and touching, great poem yet a tragic story... |