®Gonna Do It Or Not??©

by ChildofGod87   Jan 9, 2005


Don't you dare...
Don't say that ...
Don't you grab the knife...
You think I don't know ur feeling!
But then I can...
What if I grab the knife right now?
...
What speechless?
I can end my life same as well
and you don't wanna listen to me
When I'm telling you the truth!!!
...
I can grab a knife right now!
I could probably encourage you,
But then you it'll make you think
That you just got me ending my life
Not cuz you want to end yours,
But just to look at what I have stored
You probably don't want to hear me!!!
...
Looking at your knife...
Looking at me...
Do you know what you want to do
Or don't you not know, anymore?

**~**Copyright 2005 by Sedusha**~**

(God Bless Everyone!
This was the poem I was talking about in my quotes:)
Oh, I'm not going to kill myself...Love yaz!!!)

*!*Plz rate/commet, I'd appreciated TY!!!*!*

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wicked poem and I'm happy to hear you don't want to die:) Loved it and even though it wasn't true you made it seem very real! Keep it up:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    Great poem with lots of emotions..i loved it cuz i can relate to it..keep it up girlie and glad to hear ur not gonna kill urself...latez
    *XoX Sw33ti3*

  • 19 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    ha ha, nice, this is the best you've written in my opinion, I love it!

    emma x

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    great job sweetheart!! God Bless.

  • 19 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    nice poem sudusha..always writing how u feel