Unnoticed

by Toni   Jan 11, 2005


Unnoticed

She sits by the window, she’s crying alone
A million salty tears
Splashing on the window pane
Each one for all those years

The glass is cool against her pale skin
It soothes the burning scars
And as she weeps, she looks at out the world
At the people and passing cars

She looks at the darkened clouds above
The clouds that bring the rain
She wonders if, when the clouds are crying
They feel any sort of pain

And like a cloud, she floats unnoticed
Even though her tears are falling
She can’t help but to stare at the sky
She knows that death is calling

For all she’s doing is being herself
Trying to make it somehow
But something always brings her down
She feels the time is now

Slowly the heavens begin to open
As they’re gradually torn apart
And out of them a crimson stream comes pouring
Straight from her broken heart

And this time the rain, it will not stop
Until she is run dry
Of all of her painful memories
The memories that make her cry

The clouds are much paler than ever before
But still the stream will flow
She’s determined this time that the nightmares will end
She’s determined to make them go

One by one, her streams run dry
To the very last painful drop
She lets out one last desperate cry
She knows it’s too late to stop

And all that her life has thrown at her
All she did was try
She didn’t want it to end like this
No, she didn’t want to die

Any comments would really mean a lot right now x

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  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    wow, that was incredible, deserves mor than a 5. fantastic!!!!! ma fave verse was

    And like a cloud, she floats unnoticed
    Even though her tears are falling
    She can’t help but to stare at the sky
    She knows that death is calling

    everyline displayd a perfect picture. hope you are ok, keep holding on an keep it up!! lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku ellie !xx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    that is bl00dy f u c k in amazing. it is definetly one of THE BEST poems i have EVER read. i loved it. it was amazing. great metaphors and just f u c k in hell dat was awesome. i aint lying.
    take care hun,
    u no im here to talk to if u need it *hugs*,
    i luvd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ellie
    x x x x x x x x x :D