i wanted to write something like this but i saw you beat me too it lol~ but you perfected it, i could of not done n e better~amazing write, created a vivid image as well as emotions running heavy....sad to know it happens everyday though.....:( n e 5* from me! ~keep droppin by and you will defently be a fave on my list, i truly admire your writing....
18 years ago
great poem..it flowed really nicely..very touching...
wow, thts a great poem, especially bcz it's so typical, i mean it can happen any day, to any gurl...wow...great poem tho, did you write it from experience? well umm, either way its still good, plzz read some of my poems =)
Who ever put anything less then 5 is a twit and you tell them I said that the whole thing was great it left me thinking and shocked. that is truely what a poem should do teach without having to preach exellent poem.