The sea of lost souls.

by xRachelx   Jan 19, 2005


In the sea of lost souls,
Live those not meant to be dead.
The ones who didn't let God decide,
And took their own lives instead.

They wander around, the underworld,
Distressed and alone for ever.
Trapped and doomed in a land called Hell,
They cant break free and escape - never.

Their tortured souls cry out,
Asking to be saved.
But they cant be - their prisoners,
Because of the knifes and blood they craved.

For eternity they shall roam,
Wishing they hadn't done what they did.
Wishing they had faced their troubles,
Instead of run away and hid.

They now realize they had so much to live for,
But they took it all away.
They pleaded for God to let them go back,
To live another day.

But its too late,
The mistakes have been made.
They committed the most selfish crime,
And now the price is being paid.

Anguished spirits forever lost,
Its what has become of them.
All because they took permanent actions,
To a temporary problem.

So if you write your suicide note,
And try to do the most terrible thing you can.
Would you prefer to live with the un-dead,
Or face life like a man?

Hope this don't offend anybody, I'm just trying to say that suicide is a BAD idea!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    i agree with you rachel, suicide is a very bad idea, but at the same time i agree with violet as well...anyways, suicide is for the weak, you must focuse on finding reasons to live..."wanting to die is a reason to live", i didn't say that, but i agree.
    keep it up!

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Nice poem, just sometimes suicide seems like the only option. Well anywayz yeh great poem, take care xxx