She can't be saved until she's heard.

by xRachelx   Jan 26, 2006


Razor-blade kisses,
And strawberry gashes.
Wrists that are bleeding,
And covered in slashes.
A cry for help,
Which may seem absurd.
She can't be saved,
Until she's heard.

Dragging the blade,
Across her scarred skin.
She smiles with joy,
Yet she knows its a sin.
It just gives her a buzz,
Makes her soar like a bird.
She can't be saved,
Until she's heard.

Laughing people,
That shout hurtful things.
When she flys,
They tear up her wings.
Calling her loser,
Freak, and nerd.
She can't be saved,
Until she's heard.

Parents that beat her,
Leave her broken and sore.
Spit in her face,
As she crys on the floor.
Even when guests are round,
They aren't deterred.
She can't be saved,
Until she's heard.

A broken neck,
In a noose thats drawn tight.
Free from her pain,
Its over tonight.
As she takes her last breath,
She utters a word.
Yet she can't be saved,
Cause nobody heard.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ixora

    This poem just flows...ironically because of its subject. Still it describes a haunting beauty and a very valid point. Most people do not take the time to listen but only lecture. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarredSoul

    LOVE IT
    oh my goodness
    love it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    Ok lets get a real comment on here. The rhyming is spectacular. Good scheme and exellent choice of words. Saying she was never saved because nobody ever heard her pain is wonderful, a great way to end it. You have such a talent, maybe you could try to apply it to another subject? There are other great depressing poems you can write that deal with other things besides cutting. Your style can be put to so many other wonderful things. Another great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by chloe

    Your poem is so well written. I wish i could write like that Love Chloéx

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    Great poem. I liked it a lot. Keep Writting. 5/5!!
    ~Sandra

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