for some reason i dont think this is about a flower at all:P well here you will get noticed, its hard not to. keep writing, your good.

Very nice poem. I understand the whole hidden meaning thing. Keep it up and thanks for the comment.
Take Care,
-Hannah-

i like how you used a flower to describe a person. great job, keep it up. -hayley-

I loved it. No offense to your age group or whatever but usually 14-25 year old write about puppy love and they don't really have a great vocabulary in writing but you really are good at it. I like how it's about a person and is disguised as something simple as a flower. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I appreciated it.

Beautiful poem, enjoyed. lol

That was a great poem, I really liked it. Thanks for the comment on mine, it's really appreciated. Keep up the good work! 5/5
-Cheerfully Cynical-

good poem rachel and yah i got what it ment..but ive heard about other poeple who didnt lol..but that doesnt matter there are alot of things i dun get that seem like the simplest thing in the world to other people lmao but anyway back to my comment!! haah i lliked htis poem keep up the god work ma petit chemise ahah

Sad and more than a little poignant.

i totally understood the context, i don't feel as if you needed the ending to show that you didn't truly mean a flower, all who reads and has basic knowlegde of poetry should see the symbolization. its a great piece of work however! May God Bless
Love Heather

THIS POEM IS FREAKING BRILLIANT!!

thanx to every1 who voted, and commented. this is one of my favourites, and it means a lot!:D

Simple and subtle yet exquisite my friend! Im in such awe

I love the imagery you used in this one xxx

I really liked this poem. I gave you a 5. This reminds me of my own poem Wilted Rose.

this poem is really good..nice word choices as well..keep it up :)

this poem is amazing. and u just keep wowing me with ur work!
love
Paulette

that was a wonderful poem, it flowed very nicely, great job!!

awww really sweet...is the flower meant to be symbolic of yourself?was really well written and visual! great work
xxxLoUxxx
thanks for your comments and praise!xxx

I like your poem I think that poems that ryhme are always much more enjoyable take a 5

good poem 5/5