This was beautiful just like every poem you do. You should start compiling some of your poems into a book or something. I'd buy it.
Depression has dug its way into my chest,
and torn out what once was whole,
it has asphyxiated all that was beautiful,
every part of my barren soul.
loved that part along with the ending. Just magnificent.
Lots of love,
wow, u put so much emotions into the poem that i'm scared to feel. the one thing i dont want u to do is cut ur self, dont do it. there are so many things out there waiting for u, so dont. really well written, like everybody said, i'l buy a book for u anytime, anyday. keep up the great work.
OMFG girl!!!! ive not been on this site in about 4 months.. mebe more n i come on n find u writing like this!!!!! Shite its brilliant.. well, not da way ur feelin bt the way you can just capture all those emotions and stick them on a page and it sounds alrite.... wow *bows to you* im dead impressed!!! sorry youre feelin so bad n sorry i havnt commented on ur poems l8ly, like i say i havnt been on ere.. its a long story but hey, im bk now!!!! if u still remember me itd b rily cool if u cud get in touch @ some point but no pressure ok? kp ur chin up hunni,