Comments : Hello Heartache

  • 15 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    This was beautiful just like every poem you do. You should start compiling some of your poems into a book or something. I'd buy it.
    Depression has dug its way into my chest,
    and torn out what once was whole,
    it has asphyxiated all that was beautiful,
    every part of my barren soul.
    loved that part along with the ending. Just magnificent.
    Lots of love,

  • Wow... *is speechless* that was pretty damn awesome. I reall liked it. *stares in amazement* O_O I'd buy a book by you any day. The whole thing was fantastic. Great job, keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this is a great poem. very real and true. Keep it up! Take care and stay strong. keep writin

  • 15 years ago

    by HeAvENLy UniQue

    This poem is so deep, You wrote it real well. I understand somehow what you are saying... keep your head up... I'll be reading more of your poems....;)
    Take care !


  • 15 years ago

    by ANNE

    Wow!! AWSOME poem!!! Can relate to so many things... You just keep rockin girl!

  • 15 years ago

    by priya

    wow, u put so much emotions into the poem that i'm scared to feel. the one thing i dont want u to do is cut ur self, dont do it. there are so many things out there waiting for u, so dont. really well written, like everybody said, i'l buy a book for u anytime, anyday. keep up the great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey hun...this is really good...keep it up and take care...keep ur head up...everythingz gonna be alrite, i'm alwayz here if ya want to talk...cya..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachele

    awwwww thats gr8 and sad keep it up luv rach

  • 15 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    OMFG girl!!!! ive not been on this site in about 4 months.. mebe more n i come on n find u writing like this!!!!! Shite its brilliant.. well, not da way ur feelin bt the way you can just capture all those emotions and stick them on a page and it sounds alrite.... wow *bows to you* im dead impressed!!! sorry youre feelin so bad n sorry i havnt commented on ur poems l8ly, like i say i havnt been on ere.. its a long story but hey, im bk now!!!! if u still remember me itd b rily cool if u cud get in touch @ some point but no pressure ok? kp ur chin up hunni,
    L xoxoxox

  • 15 years ago

    by Chloe

    Hey hun,
    Of course I still remember you! You're my favorite poet :P E-mail me anytime you want <3

  • 14 years ago

    by rachyBBY

    That was one of the best poems ive ever read..ur such a good writer. ur poems are rad. sad, but very good. i love ur work, and im sorry if you realli feel this way =[[