The letters of trying

by Semaran   Jan 25, 2005


When we try...
when we TRY to write...
we just try too hard,
and all that we write,
comes out as a bard.

when we TRY to care...
we just care too much,
and things fall apart,
at the feel of our touch.

when we TRY to know...
we just know it all,
and never realise any,
so thats why we fall.

when we TRY to go...
we just leave to fast,
and losing our way,
first becomes last.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    this is a poem I could relate to strongly - well done with your choice of title to this piece very creative!
    I admire your uniqueness of talent and poetry so highly Semaran and your kind comments are always of value my friend - much luv!