This poem is really straight to the point and I like that... Don't stop doin' it!!!

Woww this is an awesome poem! its seriouslyy one of my favorites i love it soo muchh i can relate to it sooo muchhh! awesome aweseom job!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

Awesome! I understand how your feeling! Your a great poet! Don't stop!

Oh this is a really great poem, but very sad. So many people go around these days who keep there emotions so hidden, and that really shouldn't be. I hope you don't really feel like this, but if you do, don't have suicide as a last resort, just try to talk to someone. You and your life r 2 things that r too special to waste. Nice work though! if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx.

awesome poem and girl dont hold it inside ..if u talk to someone u'll feel better ...theres so many ppl in this world that are goin through the same thing and they'll listen cuz they can relate they can help u thru ..committing suicide will just leave all ur pain with the ones u love ..my mom committed suicide and ill be scarred for the rest of my life ..i just wish i coulda been old enuff to understand and help her thru ...she had no one ..so im just lettin u kno that we are all here for u ..again great poem -ashley

that was excellent! great poem!! keep it up!!

hey if you ever need someone to talk to dont be afraid to pm me!! stay strong!!

wow....
that is truly an amazing poem
i feel it- all the way
i totally agree
i'm so sorry that you feel this way, but writing is a GREAT outlet- keep it up!!

your poem is incredible, it reaches deep down inside. i feel your pain and you express it so well!!! AWESOME JOB!!!
NEVER STOP DOING WHAT YOU ARE DOIN!!! you are great at it. can't wait to read more!!!

wonderfull!!!luuuved it!! thatz how i feel too...kep it up
byezz

omg that was a great poem, u know i feel the EXACT same way, im like depressed and sad right now but i dont show it 2 other people at all, i just go along and help them w/ their problems and act as though i have none but i feel really tortured inside, but the best way 4 people 2 not find out is 2 act happy and put a smile on my face even though i honestly wish i was just dead, well newayz sry 4 goin on like that but i loved ur poem, i really relate 2 it, its really great u really have talent, i gave it a 5, good job

Thanks so much everyone for all the comments! :D
Take care all of ya,
Rachelxx

wow that is great.. keep it up

omg this poem is soo good!! so sad... I know exactly how you feel.. great job hun!!
check out my poems when you get the chance!

Love,
Tiff

Great poem! I do the same! I can tottally relate! Great job putting it into words! I really like your writing so keep it up! Thank you for your comment!

Holy man. THis is so good! your a crazy writer. 5/5. your added to my favorites for sure. Keep up the good work . Im going to read some more of yours
Paula <3

wow ur poem kicks ass!!! try to get some help though. being sad all the time isnt worth it.

gosh that was good! I really love the part about u being afraid your mask will crack, though of course all the other parts are good too! U have a ton of talent, what can i say but give u 5/5 for sure!
SatuzKa

I feel the same exact way, but i could never seem to put it into words. Great job! If you havw a chance please check out some of my poems.

Dont give in to it, great poem, its horrible having to hide away your feelings but be strong
xxxxxx