Pain

by slaMBit   Jan 29, 2005


She lookes into the mirror
tears stream down from her eyes.
does she know this person?
for she is all despise

does anyone really know her
for who she really is?
or is it just to cover up
all of those sorrowful lies

people don't see her
or the misery
she caries deep inside her
what no1 can ever see

she sits in the corner
of the room in pain
torn by all those lies
that she will never tame

told to keep the truth
from coming out at her
she suffers in silence
they will never stir

this girl is just so happy
all just an act to stay sane
but this girl is taking over
she feeding on her inside pain

slaMBit 25.1.05
poem #2

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  • 19 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    wow this is really good thanks for the comment and the idea i will try and make it longer cyz

    *Amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by slaMBit

    thank you for posting how you thought they were i wenjoy getting comments from my poems! my poems are all writen about me... i now have a problem and am going to see a councler... this poem is writin about the girl in my head... the girl who i dream about... the one who tells me to cut myself and hit my legs... shes cause me so much pain so i am writing about her alot... plz make sure to look at my other poems
    CYAZ
    slaMBit

  • 19 years ago

    by Raven

    It kept my attention...it was interesting.Great job