How true.

rch this was a really good poem u dint have to make a deal with me so id give u a 5! lol even though i liked that u gave me a 5 too lol

nice poem dear. beautiful work! 5 :)

Wow. Great Write. I can really relate to this poem. Great job. Keep writing. I would love to read more from you.

very inspring.. i enjoyed reading it.

WOW Im so glad I have come across your poetry Rachele - your very talented this is your first piece I have had the pleasure of reading and am very impressed - you have brilliant descriptions my friend!

beautiful poem! i love it

Wow thats such a beautiful poem with so much meaning in it, I really love it, you sound like such a creative person xxx

This poem is very nice. I think it takes extreme talent and insight to write something so...what's the word...inspirational, especially at 14 or 15 y/o. Good work. Keep it up!

Wow this is a realy powerfull poem, your feelings are realy obvious! Thanks for commenting on my poems xxjoxx

This is a really nice touching poem and reflected is how good a writer you are.

Thats so sweet and interesting! I REALLY like it, its different!
keep it up! 5/5
luv kt

wow that was really good!!
you can really get the reader to imagine what your saying
true talent!!

caris

That's excellent, I have no suggestions. Great job!

It was a good poem.... i liked it alot but i think it kinda lacked something..... but i still gave it a five out of five great job keep it up.

Again I give you a 5. Very descriptive. your poems remind me about a lot of the poetry I wrote when I was your age.

I really liked that one. It reminds me of my room when I was little. Keep it up.
Take Care,
Hannah M.

really good! keep up the good work! I really like that!

wow your an awsome poet, you really have talent, i hope to read more of your work soon. great job!!!

i loved it.. i gave it a 5 :)