In the end..

by Alex   Jan 30, 2005


Wat is the point in talking
when I know people can hear
what is the point in crying
It's just an empty tear

"Face up to my problems"
you said to me
but you didn't understand
you didn't want to see

The pain inside my frozen eyes
the cold inside, the hurt
every time I went to talk
It only made it worse

I told you that I felt ashamed
of everything I had done
for every single drop of blood
that was yet to come

then you just ignored me
and talked about your hair
what about your promise
you said you would always care.

Now I am a stupid little girl
alone with no friends
that is your fault
you weren't there in the end.

**please comment on my poem**

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  • 15 years ago

    by Melantha

    Verry good poem. I really like ur poems =)
    All that I have looked at are just great! Keep up ur good work ^^

    I think This Poem describe how life is today,at least for many.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Alex this is one of ur best I think! Flowed very well! Beautiful and very well written! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    you have a talent.. i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    This one I like more than some of the others. Keep it up. When you get a chance would you check out some of my poems too? Anyones you want. Peace out.

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex

    Thanks again hussain i have dun tht to :) I like the fact u can actually tell me and it shows tht u do acually read the poems and don't just skimm them like some people do. Thank you.

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