gr8 poem bec keep it up luv rach

oo that was hott!! so true so true...me personally i could care less about what ppl think!! but this is so true!! keep it up!! :)

great poem . . . im a very insecure person and il take the advice on board . . . well done 5/5 x x x take care x x x

some lil happy feeling inside of yourself ... i know what your talking about i think about it all the time .... good job u captured the feeling perfectly

wow thats a great peom and soo true, now its like everybody always tries to impress everybody else but it should only matter what we think of ourselves, we shouldnt let other people make up our lives for us, great job!!!!

wow, great poem u really wrote it perfectly...amazing work!

It was really nice a reality or should I say the truth about the world that many of us fears...

wow awesome poem girl! Every teenage girl need to hear and listen to that. Very well written...great way getting your point accross. i Might've said that about another poem too but it's true here too...lol. Great job!
KIU
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thats really good. and true. good job. thanks for the comment. 5/5

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