its a beautiful poem, and keep it up b/c you are one of my favorite writers. 5 all the way

Nice job, this topic however, is very cliche. But I don't know apoet that hasn't written about sadness/depression. Anyway, for a poem about depression, you did a nice job. Keep it up!

wow... that was soo amazing, i loved that poem! you put your words together so well, it's unbelievable, and the rhyming!... wow, it was awesome. keep on writing xo

Omg!....Wow!! lol What an aaaaamazing poem! that was so good, it flowed so well and was really neat! Excellent work!! Very awesome poem:o)
Shannon

This poem rocks on. One of your best. The thing I love most about poetry, is if it makes me feel something..if I can relate to it. This I did. Awesome job. 5 from me.

Wow...This is the best poem I've read in a while.

thats great, i love how u rhymed it. pleeze read mine and comment.

I love this.It is so beutiful. and then ryming doesnt seem forced

i never thought i would be able to relate to anything like i related to this, its amazing i wish i could write like that! keep on writin =)!

Hey, awesome poem, and thank you for the comment... Take care, I hope to read more soon

you have talent the poem really flowed