Only you

by Poetic Tragedy08   Feb 3, 2005


The night you said goodbye tore me into a thousand peices
Peices so complicated it will never be put back together again
You were my only one
The only one who will ever make me smile
The only one who could make me feel loved
Now that you've said goodbye
I'm dead
But blood will be spilled this night
something people dread forever
I look forward too
This shall be the night I die
If you say goodbye to me
I say farewell to the world

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    *im evil, it feels good saying sorry*
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    *I'm evil,it feels good saying this, im sorry*

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Can I ask one little question, are all 66(haha 66 wow thats like 666) of your poems bout this girl Brandy?
    I personly didn't like this one but it is old and you have improved as a writer, but this has good ideas and I would love to see it redone to flow better.
    Like Ari said its deep, its also powerful, but needs help:D

    *im evil, it feels good saying sorry*

    Your a great poet, learning more everyday keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    very deep....

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