Save me

by Elise   Feb 3, 2005


F**k, what's happening
I don't know if anyone cares
If it's normal I'm crying
If it's normal that no one's there.

Will someone take my hand
And get me out of here
Will someone understand
That there's something I fear ?

Where are you my friends
You seem so far away
I don't want it to end
I just want to stay.

I feel so alone
I feel like I can't see
Is this place really my home ?
Is this what I wanted it to be ?

Can someone here my call ?
Can someone just save me ?
Can someone see me fall ?
And just try to catch me ?

Save me from the pain
Just take me somewhere
Where there's an eternal rain
And where you'll always be there.

Save me from this quiet place
I feel so alone...

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  • 20 years ago

    by ?

    Great poem!! I love the way you expressed the emotion of lonelyness, I can really realate to it! keep it up xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awwww... quite sad poem but really meaningful! I loved the way you expressed yourself on this piece! Well Done!!! Keep it up! Def. 5 from me!!

    *~*Sedusha*~*
    --Check some of my poems if you get the chance--

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    amazing poem!! i love it!

  • 20 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    Save me from this quiet place
    I feel so alone...
    that sounds alot like my line.. its so quiet here all alone :P good fun, another great write, and know that i am always here. you just need to talk to me. keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Elise

    lol yea I kno...im so stupid ^^

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