Again, another great poem...You may want to read over it..I found it a little hard to follow in places...just the way it wasworded, but it was still good

yeah some places were a little hard to follow but over all i thought it was great i enjoyed reading it so far i really like your work its excellent! >>5/5<<
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I agree with them. If you reworded some places so that it flows better the poem would be ten times better than it already is.

your poem was really good and sad.

awww that was a really cute poem, i loved it, good job!!!

wonderful poem!

also another great poem...good job 5/5

great poem!! nicely done!!