In This Land

by SmileeItsBritt   Feb 8, 2005


In this crimson soul
Tears they fall free
The pain left in the shadows
In my land of make believe
Pretending comes first nature
To tell the truth would be a crime
I must hide my inner demons
Can't show the pain inside
In this crimson heart
The blood doesn't flow free
To live must have a lost
In my land of misery
In this crimson hell
The air I breathe is not for free
A penny price to inhale fumes
In this land of disbelief
In this crimson angel's eyes
Her tattered wings are not for free
Happiness and freedom are at a high cost
In this land I'll always bleed

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  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    Another good poem.Iv read alot of your stuuf and your a realy good writer
    great job

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    another great poem, very creative..loved it..keep up your great work..:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    Wow. Very original subject. I really liked this one. Keep it up.

  • Very creative peice. Another 5! I can;t help it, you are going on my favorites. Very nice job! nothing else said

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