Hide and Seek

by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤   Feb 8, 2005


Hiding in the crowd
Seeking my blade
Hide my lies
Seek my inner thoughts

What you are saying
Drills into my mind
Over, and over
Repeatedly

Banging my head
Against the wall
Over, and over
Repeatedly

Every second goes by
Thoughts pounding in my head
Beckoning a final decision
Hoping to make the right choice

Hide the scars
Seeking advice
Hiding my past
Seeking my future

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  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    Yep, you're right Logan. Thank you Violet! I really appreciate these comments.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    i like it, good job. keep it up. its rather inspirational i think, if i get it right and its about moving on.,,, well keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    This is such a good poem! I love the lines...
    'What you are saying
    Drills into my mind
    Over, and over
    Repeatedly

    Banging my head
    Against the wall
    Over, and over
    Repeatedly'

    I love the repeatition, wonderful work, keep it up! xxx

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