Death Awaits

by DevilWithin   Feb 10, 2005


I lay down in my casket
I'm all blue and cold
Someone once told me I was being sold
I don't know how it all started out
I just know I was there and about

I hear my mom's tears grieving
Hoping she is not in fear
My dad's calming her down
While my sister holds her baby clown
I should have thinked before I blinked

I tried so hard to get away
It was no use it was just a play
down and a sack i came
people were ashamed of me
I should have known not to drink and drive

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  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Hey this is kinda good,, not ur best but keep at it u will get there,, u have a talent that will get better over time,, keep writing girl,, nice job,, lots of lovin,,
    **doz an1c me**
    thx for ur comments :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow i really love this poem, its so sad yet has so much feeling! Well writtin! It's short yet so powerful! Keep it up!! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey Rachel!
    Loved the picture it paints, your family grieving for you.
    Great message in the end.
    Loved it!
    xoxo
    Laterz,
    Shirlz

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Haha thank you..----Rachel---

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    thanks guys and you Michelle i lov ur poems too

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