Frozen

by Minkus   Feb 13, 2005


I'm frozen
Don't know what to do
This is impossible
There's no way
I can't do this
Or can I?
I can try
That's all

I'm frozen
I did it
but it's not what I thought
It's not great
I'm horrified
I didn't do this
It wasn't me
No way

I'm frozen
With guilt
at what I did
At what I've become
But if I don’t move
then no one will notice
And it'll be OK
So I'm frozen

This poem doesn't really relate to me, but just like 'What Was I Thinking', it was fun to write.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    this poem has a very unique style...i like it...nice job...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    that was wonderful 5/5 keep it up. you have got talents.

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this was good, 5/5.it left me hanging, i liked it.
    thanx for your comments!!
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Interesting write. With the subject being regret, or whatever, lol, it's relatable to a lot of people, but if you didn't tell that at the end, it could have seemed to have multiple meanings. I liked it. Nice work David.:)

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Hey, good stuff, very interesting! Keep it up! luv kt

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