wow...amazing...im soo shocked...so visual...soo distrubing...loved it tho!.. keep it up..wow!!...im amazed...great job girlie!
love,
-Gems

wut an extreme poem allie

that was very interesting. really good, bbut slightly creepy.

reaminds me of law and order, svu.. and csi..

well written. keep it up

wow, extremely disturbing, extremely discriptive, and extremely well written....it was an amazing poem, but intensly creepy....

Kalika

So much imagery, description, and great explosive detail. This poem sat me back on my behind for sure. Well done girl :D i loved it, as usual your poetry rocks my socks.

;;^^Kalah

I GOT IT ALLRIGHT!!....lol it'l lovely..reminded me of silence of the lambs...very very awesome stuff...keep writing!