That's really cool, I like it.

I liked this poem. it was really heartfelt. The only thing that I would say is work on rhyme scheme, because then you will be awesome. Keep it up!

aww that was soo cute!! i loved it!! great job!! keep it up!! :)

Very good writing! I think its wonderful. Keep up the good work and thankyou so much for your comments! They were honestly appreciated.
-Kate

totally know how u feel! that was a really good poem, would give it a 15!!!! keep writing n dont stop! looking foward to reading more!
~Lia Jnell

Great poem! Keep up the good work!! Take care!
-Conner

this is a great poem and you deffinently have talent, I've read some of your other work and i like it! keep going i want to keep reading! and i really hope the two of you stay together you sounds like a match!

This is a really nice poem. I feel like this poem is written to the way I feel too. Good Job!

i like this poem too...5.0!

what a cute poem... excellent job keep writing!!

..xO Jessie

SWEET AND DEEPLY WRITTEN POEM, I LOVED IT...

~ very beautifully written, lovely lines
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

That was a really beautiful poem nice work!
xxxChristinaxxx

that was so well written, definately a 5/5 thanks for commenting on mine, keep it up xxxx

Another great poem. That was well written and I could say it flows very well. Great work!!! =) 5/5

awwww that was soooooo cute, i hope you and your bf make it a long time, keep up the great work!!

great poem

wow! this is an awesome poem and it has so much meaning i wanted to cry when i read it cuz it was so cute and i thought bout my bf when i read well keep up the great work and if you have time maybe you can read/rate/comment some of my poems?! lol thanks so much and 5/5 from me!
~SaMi~

I feel what you feel here girl, I'm WAY overprotected too....
oh, in one of your quotes you said,
"If love hurts,
Then why the hell love?"
and the reason to love is because love really is the greatest thing in the world, and it's really what keeps this world spinning.....like Amit says, Always believe in love.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

you wrote this to me a while ago.
and i wanted to thank you, one of my quotes i wrote after getting out of a rough relationship, and as of today, i have been with someone for 2 years, in april. and i really do love him <3

your poem is amazingg.