Raising my white flag (so lost)

by Janice Brown~©~   Feb 15, 2005


So lost
In a world without colour
The paint is fading
Growing grey and duller

So lost
In a never ending world
Now I know what it feels like
To be a lost and lonely girl

So frustrated
With the way things are
How boring my life is
As appetizing as a muesli bar

The life I live
Is something I could do without
It's the same old thing
Day in and day out

Being sad and lonely
Can become such a drag
Stuff this, I give up
I'm raising my white flag

I give in
No longer can i take this,
The fact ...that no-one realizes...
I even exsist.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent job! I know the feeling I think most anyone can relate to this poem! Check out mine if u would Thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shy

    that is how i feel all the time
    and my "friends" don't care

  • 19 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    great work! i liked it alot great work! i definately like the white flag... awesome

    -jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    wow great workk i loved itt :D
    peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "I give in
    No longer can i take this,
    The fact ...that no-one realizes...
    I even exsist. "
    spelled "exist"

    I thought this poem was good. The imagery concerning the white flag brings up not only images concerning surrender, but war and strife as well, both of which add a feeling of uphill struggle, as if you've tried very hard to keep going, but you have given up because it was too much, or too dull.

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