Bedtime Rain

Nice. i particularly liked:
"Just don't wake me in the morning
Because I'll still be soaking in the pain"
Effective use of language, and short and sweet. nice job.

wow you can really write your poem is so good 5/5

good poem. its very original, especially the style. i enjoyed reading it alot

Yea, well i dont know him personally, but we went to the same school, and the whole thing was sad.

Thanks

great poem. keep it up.