wow i adore the ending...some vocab slip ups here and there by the way..i think lied shoild be lay and
'She could of died' should be shew could have died?

Wow that was r eally something. You really put a lot of though about it. But some words are misplaced like Truth said. Still a great work!!! =)

Ops could you plz check out mine also I have my new poem titled my story thanks!!!=)

this is so beautiful!! the meaning of true friendship is beautifull captured by your poem...... keep it up
luv always janice xoxox

wow! excellent poem marta! i love it! every word seemed so real and deeply expressive. amazing job!

thank you for the comment and this poem was so amazing. The title drew me in but the poem had me going nearly to tears. WOW, i am so sorry for your loss of her, I had a girl I had helped commit suicide on me, it really damages you but if someone can't truly be happy on Earth, heaven's best for them. Never forget your lil "star" gorgeous poem once again *5

love Heather.

the title also drew me to reading it
was really sad :(
my hearts with you!!!!
lilkit
xx

Touching poem! You really showed how much u cared. I look forward to reading more of ur work! Keep it up! U have a talent! Take Care!