I love how you wrote "he's not gonna end his life, he's gonna wait for her" i love that part.. it made me feel hope for you and this special girl..
luv always janice xoxox

beautiful poem.

This is a beautiful poem. So heartfelt. Keep up the good work and thanks for the comment

Very good. I loved how you wrote it and basically just put the entire poem together. It flowed so well and had such an awesome meaning behind it. Thank you for the comment. =) Take care and keep writing!

God bless you! <3

Beautiful! Great job.

you have alot of talent
well put together
thnax for commenting on mine
i really liked this poem!!
love
caris

Great poem! So well written... I look forward to reading more of your stuff..You are soo talented..
Keep it up!

Rebecca.

wow, that was soo unbelievably good. it was written really well and the ending made me sigh in awe. that was really beautiful, thanks for your comment, and keep it up ;) xxxx

Thank you so much everyone!!! I really appreciate it.=)

This is a realy good and deep poem keep up the good work and thankyou for commenting on my poems!!

Ouuu I love it! A definite 5!!! I used tah live in da Philippines heh. Anyways keep it up! I really love it! Arrivederci!

Good but it can be revised. It's an awesome poem but the grammatical errors really bring it down. Honest "4". Keep up the good work though. Just take your time and you'll be fine. Take care!
-Conner

Good poem mate
ben

very nice poem..i liked it alot. i gave it a 5.keep on writting:).

really really touching i love it. keep up the good work.

~catherine~

The grammatical errors bring the poem down a lot. I liked it to an extent, but it didn't have very much flow. All in all, it was an alright poem, just needs some work. Just keep writing.

Good stuff. I liked it. It was very heartfelt.

this is... um...theres no words
it is really (100 times over)great
thnx 4 commenting on mine
i've read some of your others there
really good 2 so now ur on my Fave list

wow, i loved reading this poem, it was really good, if u get chance can u check out mine thanks, keep up the ace work xxx

I reall liked this poem! Very nice job on it, the effort shows. 5/5 definatly. Keep it up!

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