Candle

by tender69   Feb 18, 2005


Like a candle in the dark
i try to light my way
but I'm forever lost
and here i sit and sway.
like a candle in the light
i give no hope at all
so soon I'll be blown out
in the light i feel so small.
~a friend at wits end

sorry if you couldn't understand me, I confuse people a lot.I was trying to say that when I'm alone I can't move on, but when I am among many great others, I feel inadequate and small.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Great work, this poem was done amazingly.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Wow...loved this a lot!!!!*5 the comparison was great!! but I don't want you to die out:( God bless U

    love Heather