Thats when ill stop loveing you

by Rashelle   Feb 19, 2005


When summer brings snow.
When plants never grow.
When fish cant swim.
When losers win
When theres no more tears.
When theres an end to all the years.
When birds don't fly.
When little kids don't ask why.
When morning brings no dew.
When the moon turns blue.
When the sun doesn't shine.
When grapes don't make wine.
When Autumn leaves never fall.
When mountains are no longer tall.
When rain doesn't drop.
When the cherry doesn't go on top.
When grass isn't green.
When the future can be seen.
When sugar isn't sweet.
When the heart doesn't beat.
When god commands me too
Thats when ill stop loving you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    this is so cute i love it! great job keep it up! and thanx for you comment it was awhile ago but i'm not sure i ever returned the favor...but i really like your stuff so i'm definetely going to read more when i get the chance:)
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    i really liked this poem, keep it up xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    that was a very cute poem, i loved it good job, please rate and comment mine 2

  • 19 years ago

    by Paula

    WOW. i really really really like this. it is so sweet. REALLY well written. Keep upp the good work
    Paula

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this is a beautiful poem, I'm a sucker for sweet love poems, 5/5
    thanx for your comment!!
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

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