Hero of Mine

by Hannah Leigh Pate   Feb 20, 2005


I have never felt so alone.
There is nothing convincing me to live.
Lost inside my world unknown.
With no more love to give.

I was running closer to the edge,
Nearly ready to jump the ledge.
Circling lost nowhere,
Looking for one’s care.

I was nearly ready to die.
I almost bid farewell to my life.
Everyone close to me had finally gone,
And I felt like I could not go on.

Then I saw you.
You reached your hand out for me.
You helped me through,
When I was broken eternally.

You said hello, as everyone else walked on.
You comforted me when other were gone.
You were there,
You always cared,

My savior, my hero, is you.
You pulled me from suicide,
Gave me a reason to continue.
Thank you, hero of mine.

^ I think it could use a little revising.

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  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Great poem! 5/5 keep writing..