Tonight I'm taking my life

by Paula   Feb 20, 2005


I have went with this to long
I just didn't want to let go
I stayed here just for you
And that I want you to know

You were the one that kept me here
I didn't want to die, cause of you
You were my best friend
You were the only one who knew

You knew about all my pain
And all about the nights that I cried
You were the one who put up with me
When my brother died

You were there for good and bad
You were my shoulder to cry
But now that you ended your life
To everyone else I say bye

I'm going to follow you in your footsteps
I'm going to take my life
I'll do it in the exact same spot as you
With the exact same knife

I'll lay there beside that tree
Looking up to the sky
I will cry so hard
Until my eyes go dry

Then I will take that knife
Where the dried up blood lays
from when you stabbed yourself
and I will end my days

I'll leave a simple note
That will read just one line
How much I hate you all,
You all were just so blind

I will tuck it in my pocket
so my parents can pull it out
Maby they will never know
What my death was about

I will also add one more thing
For all the kids who wished I would die
For all the stupid kids
Who for made me cry

It will simply say
Tonight I'm taking your advice
Then in big bold letters it will say
Tonight I'm taking my life

--please comment or vote-- really means alot

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mary

    Great poem AGAIN
    :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Alicia

    Wow.. your peoms are amazing I hope this really isn't true that you don't feel that way.-Always and Forever~Alicia~

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Wow that was great! I loved it! It was such a powerful poem. I particularly liked the last verse, but if you are thinking about commiting suicide then please please dont do it. You have to much to live for.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    wow very good but I hope it isn't something u really feel. U have talent girl keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    omgsh..that was very very sad i loved it alot..you are extremely talented