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by Rashelle   Feb 22, 2005


What happened to the real you.
All these actions seem be so untrue.
When were you one to follow?
Your true feelings is what you swallow.
You want to be included.
Really your just becoming more secluded.
Secluded for what u really feel.
Your true thoughts is what you conceal.

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  • lovely poem i have added the continued part to black tears if you would like to take look and strong words its an awsome poem >>5/5<<
    bec xXx

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Peer pressure can be a really bad thing, as shown here. Nice poem.

    Spelling mistake: where should be were.

    Bert