this is a really great poem. I liked the part about deja vu...haha thanks for all your comments!
Love Always,
Angel

i agree, this is a great poem!! i my fav parts was the first and second stanza..but loved the whole poem..keep it up!! :)

this is really good keep up the great work....~sherrie~

i love it!!

Hey this was a great poem. I understand completley. I also just started writing poetry bout 4 months ago and literaly never thought i would come to love it as much as i have. Well see ya!

wonderful poem!
it flowed really well and was really well put
i liked the imagery you used in it, great stuff!
keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

omg that poem was incredible, i know exactly how u feel, great job, i loved it!!!!

one word......amazing