I like how you wrote this poem, it doesnt need structure which some people dont see but i do. Very good job, I hope you don't feel this way, i know times get hard but they also get better. All the luck in the world!

wow that is so sad but awsome poem! keep it up
xxxChristinaxxx

you are quite talented....although that is an extremely sad poem, it was so well written....excellent job.......

Kalika

another great poem!! yes, you are talented!! keep up your writing..dont stop!! :)

Very well done Loved it! Keep it up!

I really like this poem. It has been well written. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

v.nice one! i don like many poems tht dont rhyme..but this one ws good! tcz~

Hang in there honey xx

Hey great write! This is so dark and powerful! Keep up the great work!
Love alwayz....
haily
XOXOXOXOX

It's good just to get things out, isn't it? Well expressed.

I like the way you wrote your poem...although it seems a little cluttered the rest is okay...keep it up:D