"Crossroads"

by creasy   Mar 1, 2005


It was dark,
and outside it snowed;
And the only noise that was heard,
was from the song “crossroads.”

I lock myself in the closet,
I cry myself to sleep;
I hate my life so much,
all I can do is weep.

The lights are off,
the music is loud;
And soon at my house,
there will be a big crowd.

I have a pen and paper,
that I hold in my hand;
And I begin to write this,
before I am removed from this land.

No one asks about me,
or checks if I’m okay;
The truth is I don’t think they’d care,
If I were to leave today.

Well I have the knife in my hand,
I’m shaking as I write;
I slide it across my wrist,
and begin to lose my sight.

My vision is blurry,
it will soon be gone;
And so will I,
I the end of this song.

I pick up the knife,
and slide it again;
I can see the blood,
and I can feel the pain.

Now my carpet is stained,
with crimson blood;
And the tears are coming down,
just like a flood.

I’m lying on the floor,
with blood all around;
I wonder how long it will be,
until I am found.

Like I said before,
no one really cares;
Oo wait I hear someone,
coming up the stairs.

I hear my name called,
And through my blurry vision I can see,
That someone actually cares about me.

Someone looks in my room,
and they see a light from my closet;
They call my name,
but besides the music, the room is quiet.

She open’s the closet,
and screams real loud;
I don’t have long to live,
my blood’s all poured out.

She screams for family downstairs,
and runs to the phone;
I’m sorry I had to do this,
but you should have been there when I felt alone.

I cant talk,
I am far too weak;
She holds me on her lap,
and begins to speak.

She said she loves me,
and asked me why;
But all I could do,
was look her in the eye.

Family comes,
and sees her crying;
The ambulance comes,
as I slip away-dying.

I now realize,
that they really did care;
But just for that one moment,
they weren’t there.

It was dark,
and outside it snowed;
And the only noise that was heard,
was from the song “crossroads.”

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i just wanted to say thanks for the comments, they mean so much...you all have great work!! keep it up!! take care...:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow wow.. 5 stars! Take Care

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Rocky start... but you pulled it off well by grasping the readers and pulling on their emotions. An unfortunate twist of events, you carried on not only from her death, but how others reacted. Well done, though you didn't need to force rhyming to make this powerful. it already was.
    Very sad... yet beautiful and ironic.

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    Oh my God, did that actually happened? I hope you are better now.. if it is of any help, you write beautifully, congratulations, and keep on writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Excellent poem....so well done....I have seen that scene before, although I was the one finding a friend....you captured it well.....great job....

    Kalika