Gone

by ** JeNa **   Mar 1, 2005


Her tears flow like a river
out of her deep brown eyes,
and ran down her face,
the day he said goodbye.

The soft touch of a warm embrace
was what she felt that day.
When he gave her that last hug,
She knew her love couldn't stay.

The clouds looked down on her
as tears ran down her face.
She was torn up inside
when he turned around and left that place.

Now she looks back and remembers
the day they first met,
she remembers being so happy.
That’s a day she’ll never forget.

But now it’s all over,
and her feelings still grow.
But it’s too late because he’s leaving,
as her tears continue to overflow.

*~* please comment and vote, I would really appreicate it, thank you *~*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    sweet poem i loved every bit of it. you are a talented person keep writing.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    great poem...this i can really relate to...you sound like you've had your heart ripped out a few times....
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Amber D.

    This is a really good poem 5/5 keep up the good work! Comment mine to please

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Awesome poem hun. Keep it up!!

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    another great poem!! powerful! loved the words u used too!! keep it up i love your work!

    vedali